MomoSmoothie's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Karco - Temple]

Amazing

Man this song sends my mind drifting miles away no matter what im doing.
I put it on repeat on my ipod and i think i listened to it about 30 times, and even after that it didnt get annoying or repetetive or anything.

The only problem is that its a bit short imo, like.. im all high in the clouds listening to it and all of a sudden it ends, so i have to snap back into reality and wait for it to restart again O_o
So i was wondering if you could like make an extended version of this song, around 5+ minutes or something. That would be awesome =]

Karco responds:

Hey, sorry for the late response! Glad you liked it so much. The reason I keep my ambient songs so short is to keep them addicting... which is probably the reason you listened to it about 30 times on your iPod. :P Longer ambient songs, past two or three minutes, isn't going to happen for a while, unfortunately. :\

Thanks anyway for the review, glad you liked it! :D

[DJ Comet-Siphon]

Intense XD

The beginning starts off really good, and jumps right into the intense acid dnb, which is def good.
But like others have said yeah its a bit scratchy cuz there are so many instruments at once.
And in my opinion its a bit long, so it kind of loses its feel after the first few minutes.
But the beginning is sick, make more songs like that :D

(oh by the way lol hows my remix coming?) :P

[{Zealon} Fusion (Preview)]

0:18 and on was good

The intro was a bit weird and kinda messy, and its like there was a pause at 0:08.
So one thing you could try to work on is your transitions.
But when it kicked in at 18 seconds that actually sounded really nice.
Keep goin.

Zealon responds:

Yes, Yes, I agree that the first part is all messed up, I'm better when it comes to doing DnB, more than Rock-style.

Thanks for the review.

[time trance]

Holy S^%#

Dude make this into a full song SERIOUSLY, it sounds so badass :D

05AshallL responds:

wow , ,....thnx!!!, lol

[Peculiar Penguin]

hahah awesome

Lol this song DOES remind me of like..random penguins wabbling around lol. Thats so cool XD
Someone should really put this in a flash :P

... Now do a crazy hard trance remix of this O_o

[~Sudden Death~]

Pretty cool

That actually sounds pretty sweet. Turn it into a song and it could sound 100x sweeter.
Like in some hardcore acid trance or dnb song.. i could actually really see it becoming something.
Only gave 7* because its just a short loop, but otherwise i really suggest you take it farther.
Good luck :D

Iplaygames responds:

I'll try...

[[e.b] Morbid Endurance]

Nice

The only thing thats keeping me from giving it a 10 is the fact that its a bit slow, like Djryo said. Thus it doesnt really sound like a dance song, and more trancey-ish. I swear, make the tempo faster and you will get insta 5/10/downloads.
Because everything sounds really nice together, at a faster pace it would sound even more kickass.

CommandBeanz responds:

Lol thanks I'll give it a try and see sounds better

[-(Enmity)-]

Ohhh daayum!

Wow one of the best DNB songs ive heard on NG so far.
This actually inspired me to go and try some of my own dnb songs..when i finish my other crap that is :P

But seriously awesome work!
5/5 10/10
*Downloaded*

[SizzloRox - Walk]

Niiice 8D

Thats actually a pretty sweet lead you got going with the synths!
The one thing id recommend to make it even more badass is to fine tune it some,
like some of the deeper synths sound almost a bit distorted sometimes (0:50 for example), and add some variety to your beats, because the repetetive pounding kick/bass/kick/bass kinda tends to get tiring. However one thing you can do is add another bassier kick ontop of your kick, and maybe a deeper bassline, then although repetetive, it will make anyone wanna get up and move their feet =D

[Soft Trance]

Neat.

Its pretty neat to listen to, it could actually be a great song, but what kills it is the extreme repetetiveness. Change the melody up a bit, maybe add a slight bassline...
bah im not one to be giving advice on how to be making good music anyway lol.
Well its a good job for a first, and it actually is pretty relaxing to listen to :P

KJLOPIK2007 responds:

ok thanks =] =] =]